Date Submitted: 5/21/00
Title of Story: "Choices Ch. 2"
Author: chicacutie16@hotmail.com

Disclaimer: I am not anyway connected to Passions, the soap opera. I’m am merrily a fan, who likes the show, and has no life. So I decided to write what could happen. As you probably noticed, this is only my first fanfic, so please I would love comments, please E-mail them to: ChicaCutie16@hotmail.com

In Kay’s Hospital Room. . . . .

Kay felt someone next to her. She tried to open her eyes, but they were too heavy to lift. She tried to speak, but her throat was to dry to make a sound.

“Kay I’m so sorry. I wish you would wake up. I wish I had saved you earlier, but I didn’t see you through the smoke. I’m so sorry.” The person started to cry. “Kay, I really do like you. I hope you wake up. Kay, I miss you so much.” The person was holding her hand. She moved her fingers around the persons knuckles.

“Kay! Kay! Are you awake?”

Kay slowly regained her strength and opened her eyes. She saw a fuzzy figure and she closed her eyes again. I’m so tired, Kay thought.

“Kay! No! Open your eyes back up. Please!”

The person went up to her face, still holding her hand. Kay forced her eyes to open again. She focused her sight on the man in front of her.

“Reese?” Kay asked confused.

“Yeah, It’s me.”

“Where are everyone else?”

“They all went to visit Charity.”

Reese didn’t know it, but that had broken Kay’s heart. Not only was Charity more important to Miguel, she was also more important to everyone else in the world. Kay felt a pain......

In the next room with Grace, Sam and Charity. . . . .

“Aunt Grace, I’m fine, I just got a scratch. Luckily Miguel saved me in time.” She made his name sound so dreamy.

“Well, we are glad that you’re safe.” Sam smiled

“Speaking of Miguel where is he?” Grace asked Sam

“Oh, he went to get something to eat downstairs with Simone.” Answered Charity. “How's Kay doing?” Charity knew she had said something wrong by the look on their faces.

“Not to well I’m afraid...she didn’t wake up yet......” tears were starting to roll down Grace’s cheeks.

Reese runs into the room. Out of breath, he tries to speak. “You guy......Kay......just.....woke up.” says out of breath

“That’s wonderful” Charity smiled, so did Grace and Sam.

“But she just flatlined.”

Downstairs with Miguel and Simone. . . . .

“Do you think Charity will be O.K. Simone?” Miguel said not looking at Simone, but getting food from the lunch line.

“She isn’t in a coma is she?” Simone replied sarcastically. Her eyes are swollen for crying all night.

“That isn’t a funny thing to say,” Miguel picked up a cup of Jello, “Do you think Charity likes Jello?”

“Miguel, please stop! I have no clue how Kay puts up with this. Why even.” Simone pays for the food.

“Put up with what?” Miguel pays for his food.

They walk up to a table with awkward silence. Simone isn’t sure whether to say anything or not. They sit and she decides she must stand up to Miguel, for Kay, once and for all.

“You. All you ever talk about it Charity this and Charity that...it gets kind of annoying you know.” Trying to sound more nice.

“I’m sorry, but I really like Charity and...”

“Miguel, I know you care about Charity. But don’t you think that maybe your mind can get off the Charity subject for one moment? I mean our close friend is lying up there in a coma, and you are asking about Charity who is in great health, besides some scratches.” Miguel tries to say something, but Simone cuts in. “Even before all this, you have been so mean to Kay ever since Charity has arrived. If she looks nice one day, you don’t say anything to her, just to Charity. If Kay accomplishes something great, It’s nothing compared to Charity. Miguel don’t you get it?” Miguel just sits there confused. “She’s doing all this for you Miguel.”

“What do you mean Simone?”

Knowing she said something wrong, she added a last line, “If you can’t figure that out yourself, I shouldn't waste my time.” Simone gets up and grabs the food she brought for Grace and Sam. She couldn’t believe Miguel was actually so dense.

Miguel sits there by himself, thinking. Kay’s doing everything for me? But, why? Only if she....if she likes me. Everything is so clear to him now. How Kay gets so worked up when he sees her with no makeup lately. He looks up and sees Reese running to him. “Wuzup Reese?”

Reese tries to speak, but just keeps breathing hard. “Kay........flatlined,”

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